great poem! i love it! really sad but so true for some people! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

hey first thanks for comenting on my poem, i think that was a really good poem. . its how i feel about my diary too!
5/5
xox Bam

WOW that poem is really good! I really like your writing style! Keep it up :)
Love Julie
XOXOX
Take care

It flows smoothly, it was very captivating. It's quite an exciting read, and I hope you continue to write amazing pieces of work like this. 5/5
Luv always, KT