:) oooo i like this poem! it's very pretty,
Love always,
LmayxXx

Beautiful work...love how you put the element of fire into this on as well...and using it with the eyes...lovely. From looking at the other titles of your poetry I see you've others with fire/flame put in there somehow...very nice trend....off to read more :)
Oh, and great rhyming in this one.

xxx