Aww, it’s so sad and understandable. Like the way you’ve worded it all, very well done. Love the title
You've got a 5 from me
(is this is true, you can always talk to me)

You are so damn good...keep it up...

I really liked your poem. I could relate to it in every way. If you really feel this way you can e-mail me I'm here to lend a hand from one who understands. If you get a chance read some of my poems and tell me what you think. And don't forget if need someone to talk to I'm always here. Hope you had/have. A Happy New Years. =)

Wow... i really liked this poem... its exactly how i feel sometimes... it was beautifully written and just amazing! nice work and kepp it up!

sammie

Wow this is realli good...thanks for my comment!! love yaz!!
keep strong!!!!
xxxxx

I can relate a lot to this poem.
If it really is about you, you can talk to me anytime, i'm always here.

Very good...unique!! 5/5

And the shield feels like your one and only strength and no one will ever understand how broken you are under it. I understand what its like. But in the end It will be alright this I promise

This Is A Wonderfull Poem. Full Of Emotions...I Abslutly Loved It...
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Just Add Me...
Luv,
*LuvYou2Death*

Wow! I Really Like This Poem! Lots Of Emotion,Great Flow! And I Totally Relate To Everything In This Poem! 5/5
Love,
Steph*xbr0k3ndr3amzzx*

Awsome poem, really good and true.

Amazing, and true. Soso true. I too hide behind a fake life, still do, but the walls are slowly crumbling down..it only gets harder.

EXCELLENT!!!Wow..5/5!!that was really good! I felt all the amotion and sadness like it was all inside me!!Great Write!@@

I love this espically cause i can relate. this flows beautifully iespically loved "My smile is just my make-up, to hide me from this pain.My laugh just protects me, covers up where my tears stain."

I know how you feel all the way, because I am the same person. I will walk in a world, no one sees me, they see who I fake, or they see who they've made me out to be. I hide my pain so no one will laugh, or make fun of, but mostly, I know they don't understand. I think you understand though, and for how young you are, you shouldn't have to feel like this, but you write really good. If you want to email me sometime, it's vanillapassion16@yahoo.com

My real identity.Not somebody always cheerful, not somebody who is well, but somebody who is depressed and needs someone to tell.
[[my real identity - not somebody..]]
I just want somebody, to tell me it'll be alright. To look after me, and say the ends in sight.
[[Polly, it'll be alright... The ends in sight.]]

Otherwise, nicely written.. One of your best poems, though the formatting was in story form. But nicely written indeed.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

I really like it. i can really relate to it. good job.

Great poem. i really liked this one. lol. keep up the good work and keep in touch. lates. ^_^