Lovely poem, well done, keep writing you are doing really well

This is wicked! Absolutely great! I loved it! Well done and thanks for commenting on mine. And of course its alright you add me to your favourites :D i'm more than happy for you to do that! Take care and check out my other poems when you get the chance -x-

Wow..that is deep..your good thnx for ya comment..wow ur good

Love In Christ
-angel-

Lovely poem huni..
take care of urself..
and keep writing..u have talent:D xoxoxox

Great job!! 5/5

Hey, I think your poems are great...but I do not have a lot of time to leave comments on them...sorry...

Wow i really like this poem t's really abstract and it's one of those that only the writer would realy know what it was about it flowed really well. nice work

Life is continual, and that is why there is no meaning that can possibly be true. but live for what IS true because it helps you through hard times. nice poem.

Your poems are beautiful. really they are..

Nice poem. Very well written and deep in meaning. I am amazed at your potential... keep writing and keep up the great work!

The name really interested, and when i read the poem i felt like i was more relaxed 4real. i liked it alot, it was inspirational and uplifting. good job.

It is really great good job keep it up i totally understand it

O i like they way you made this poem rhym it rox

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Wow i really like this poem t's really abstract and it's one of those that only the writer would realy know what it was about it flowed really well. nice work

xox
love stained sheetz

This was a good poem, but the flow just didn't get to me...oh well, maybe it's just me..:P...I also caught something that didn't sound quite right.
"My mind is elsewhere, but I'm still standing here.
But nothing else matters, because no harm will touch near."
the "touch near" part just sounded off...maybe you could replace it with something like "come"..but hey, its just a suggestion =D Great poem! Keep it up!!

I loved the imagery of this, the idea of being able to drift off somewhere. I guess it's like daydreaming crossed with meditation lol.
A nice simple write.

I'm calmer and more prepared, not never ending fear.
[Sound of cars crashing and a sonic boom. Good f**king god, DOUBLE NEGATIVE -cringes- that RUINED IT]

This was really strong and really good up until that d*mned line. I'm apt to downrate you just for it. People don't know grammar anymore and it sickens me. But I won't; I'll look at the rest of the poem [I'll give you a 5] for it was beautifully written.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5