wow... this one is very very good. I really like it alot, nice choice of words. Keep it up.. damn this is good

Once again...WOW!WOW!WOW!!!
You are such an amazing writer! I'm gonna add you to my favorites list!
Keep it up! :)
Love alwayz....
Haily
Xoxoxoxo

Excellent write, serenity, well well written!
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

I really liked this one alot it held to a great story and kept me involved all the way great job hope to see more of this I wrote a poem simular to it callded Dark Soldier tell me what you think... Take care

Hun, You write the long poems beautifaly. Which is something I have no tallent at. So please keep writeing