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  • 19 years ago

    by hussain

    Rushing, rushing, rushing.
    Bu do they always know

    i think u missed out the 't' in But.

    well i think i know what the mesage of the poem meant. its an interesting poem. You could try to make it rhyme alittle. Alothugh there were one or two rhymes in there.

  • 19 years ago

    by disenchanted

    i dont lyke rhyming alot though i use rhyming sometimes i feel lyke poems dont have to rhyme

  • 19 years ago

    by disenchanted

    it wasnt supposed to rhyme but some slippd in!