by Allen Apr 5, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
Feelings deep inside |
hey really good poem!! i love to read your poems coz they are really amazing!! welldone and keep up the good work!! |
another great poem:) i loved this one to! |
by Brookeღ
That was different how u used the last line as the first line of the next paragraph very unique! Another great poem! Check out some of mine if u would! Thanx! |
by Lecrissa
4/5 I like the structure of it. I haven't seen one done that way before |
Hey great job! It really has a lot of meaning to it! Keep up the good work! |