Hey great job! It really has a lot of meaning to it! Keep up the good work!
~5/5~
Love alwayz....
Haily
XOXOXOXOXOXO

4/5 I like the structure of it. I haven't seen one done that way before

That was different how u used the last line as the first line of the next paragraph very unique! Another great poem! Check out some of mine if u would! Thanx!

another great poem:) i loved this one to!

hey really good poem!! i love to read your poems coz they are really amazing!! welldone and keep up the good work!!
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