Crying can kill

by Cara McTired   Apr 5, 2005


I never thought that crying could kill,
Until I started chocking on my tears,
My breaths are short and rigid,
Becuase of my emotion over the years,
When you let them all just spill out,
the mess is pretty big,
and crying doesn't help
it only kills you faster...

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  • 19 years ago

    by Cara McTired

    wow thanx a lot of people told me it wasn't THAT good! but it seems pretty popular, that makes me so happy!

  • 19 years ago

    by Polly

    oh thats so sad. keep it up 5*
    polly ~X~

  • 19 years ago

    by stephyG

    omgg great work really enjoyed ur poem!! mWAzzZ stephy XOxx :)