Deadly Whispers

by David Paul   Apr 5, 2005


Why did you leave me standing there,
I thought that you had started to care,
But I was wrong wasn't I,
(point my face up to the sky,)

Don't come back I don't want you to know,
I want your ignorance to wards me to show,
You wanted a challenge and I give you my best,
(place the pistol to my chest.)

Try to make all my wounds heal,
I'm not just talking my scars are real,
I lay beside your thoughts in bed,
(feel the blast and watch the sky turn red.)

My body aches as I think of you,
And all the things to me you do,
Your gone now and my life is great,
(Heaven begin to open your gate.)

The () means the whispers.

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  • 18 years ago

    by jess

    OMG! your work is brilliant! i have read some of your stuff and i really like it! keep up the great work!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Bredada

    your poems are great i just cant stop readin them lol

  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Great rhythm...I love the whispers...you're a creative writer...

    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Kia

    wow.... that is really really good i love that... awesome job... its like thought provocting great job

  • 19 years ago

    by Kit Kat Katie

    This is a good poem. People accually do that. It's really sad. and then there is the ppl that just think they wanna. it's all sad. Great job tho

    Love Alwayz,
    Katie Schettler