On a page

by rachel   Apr 5, 2005


On a page i sketch,
On my wrist i etch,
A portrait of my soul,
The large empty hole.
I cant breath cause inside im dying,
Slowly, slowly as im crying.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Someone special..

    Well done! Short but Powerful great use of words! Keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by rachel

    thanx 2 all hu commented ur all fab writers so it means lots comin frm u guys! xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by xRachelx

    Short and sweet. Excellent poem. I give you a five.
    Take care,
    Rachelxx

    Thanks also for the comment on my newest poem. It means alot.

  • 19 years ago

    by Misstress

    Short and Cute. ;)
    Very nice write.
    Keep on writing.
    Okies..cookies..
    ;)

  • 19 years ago

    by W H O R E

    Great use of a small ammount of words! Keep it up, 5/5
    xo

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