Great use of a small ammount of words! Keep it up, 5/5
xo

Short and Cute. ;)
Very nice write.
Keep on writing.
Okies..cookies..
;)

Short and sweet. Excellent poem. I give you a five.
Take care,
Rachelxx

Thanks also for the comment on my newest poem. It means alot.

thanx 2 all hu commented ur all fab writers so it means lots comin frm u guys! xxx

Well done! Short but Powerful great use of words! Keep it up!