That moment - make it count !

by Sabine Taylor   Apr 5, 2005


You can lose everything
You can win everything
In one moment
That counts
because you will remember
That moment

And you think that
That moment
Is the most important one
In your life
The one that counts

But what’s with the other ones
The other moments
That counted before
That moment
In your life
In your memory

Aren’t there many of
These moments
That count
In your life & memory ?
Don’t they count ?

Sometimes it seems
So clear that
That moments
That seem unimportant
Are the ones that count
In our mind & memory

Like the boyfriend
Who gives you a kiss
When you awake
In the morning
When it counts

Like the cute girl
Who presents you
A wonderful flower
On the street
In the midday
When it counts

Like the friends
Who surprise you
With a great birthday party
In the evening
When it counts

Because they all count
In our mind and soul
These moments
The unimportant ones
And the important ones
They are here to remember us
To make it count more often

Please, vote and comment on my poem, guys.
Thank you so much.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jessica V Loves U

    Ilike it alot especially the 6th stanza great job keep up the good work.

  • 19 years ago

    by Sabine Taylor

    Am I your cute girl ?

    Yours Sabine

  • 19 years ago

    by Bobby Walker

    Like the cute girl
    Who presents you
    A wonderful (poem)
    On the street
    In the midday
    When it counts