me and my freind really enjoyed your poem it wasn't dirty the way u wrote it but it was sexual

heyhey it was good! but i agree the ass thing was weird.... lol but other then that it was good, turns a girl on;)lmao

All i can say is that this has had to of happened with you before. how else would you of known every bit of detail. and all the metaphors you used. lol. Good job, and i hope she likes it.... well you know what i mean.

-Courtney

ok, totally kick @$$. that rocked. ya'll, apparently you have never experience ass play before, cus damn, it can add a whole lot. i wasnt into it, till i tried and now..well, fill in the blanks, give it a try, be open minded!! but yes, very well written, excellent in that it wasnt just hardcore erotica..it had a nice soft sensual side. sweet job. keep writing. email me sometime, or check out my stuff. you might like me erotic stuff*wink*

I wouldn't change a word. Very Hot & Very Delicious.

Oh god that poem just made me so so so darn hot. im adding you to my favourites for that, please write more erotic stuff. it was great