Porcelain

by Sinister Soire   Apr 5, 2005


*didn't end up like i wanted,,, weird and bad....*

Eyes of porcelain
Glazed over by the years
Of slow decay
And endless tears

A fragile stare
Reserved for everyone
Never broken
Until life is done

Slowly cracking
Under the stress
Of daily use
I must confess

I resume my icy gaze
Out into the world
I had my weakness
A new I unfurled

copyright 2005 © Logan brown

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  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Good poem! You really said alot with so few words! Keep to it~Holly

  • 19 years ago

    by Angeline

    I think this poem ended too early. Not to be rude or anything. If you added one more verse I think you would get a better ending. It's just like you havent finnished what you started. Anyway, its still very good:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    It isn't bad. Sure it's a little weird but who cares? It's fine.

  • 19 years ago

    by Elise

    no it's not bad it's great !! amazing poem !!! anyway, yea...I have nothing to say...I love you !!!!
    E.

  • 19 years ago

    by So-Not-Normal

    yeah great poem!!! i like it was gggrrreat ha dont ask.. neways even if it wasnt wat u intended to make it was still awesome.. some of the best art (poetry is art right?) are mistakes. neways great poem keep up the great work..
    *-*Kat*-*

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