Disoriented

Wonderful write, hun. Although I thought everything was written very creatively, I especially liked the way your wrote this:

"The corners of my mouth may turn down
And scar the dimples on my face"

Stay strong.

This is a very good poem i really liked it. 5/5

Lovely.
In these lines,
"You may throw your sticks and stones
And they may break me apart
But the words you say in brutal anger
Strike my broken heart"

I like how you took the common phrase then reworded it to show no shield to "sticks and stones" but a wound and growing pain which exceeds fromt them.

in these lines,
"I may stumble, I may even fall
And life will take it's toll
Heaven may crumble, Hell may call
But I refuse to sell my soul"

I loved how you fit in the meaning of never giving up in such a lovely and powerful way.

these,
"Bruises may show, scars may stick
But my pain cannot be seen
My stripped eyes behold a future
Whose path is bitterly obscene"

I loved how you portrayed the utter despair and foreshadow of a deadly 'yet to come'

Well done

Very good poem about love as well, thankyou for the comments on mine as it too relate to lost love from a divorce after thirty years and my not wanting to love someone again for fear of pain. And yes you hit it on the head

I love the first stanza up to the last, nice work -5

Love
Heather