i like it.. a five:)

it's kool adn has nice flow though i'm not too fond of the ending...

I love the flow! Great poem! Thanks for your comment :)

awww that was so sweet. 5/5

I can't believie that i would a lad to feel that for me : ) well done. that poem was full of emotion and you so simply love this girl. I espeshally liked "They were hidden inside, closely guarded at start
Its seems now someone has found the key to my heart" you have a really good talent. Keep it up. definatly 5/5 from me.
~@L€X~

Sweet! Like a lot of your other poems, keep on writing and displaying your talent!! -5
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

it was really good i liked it thnx for da comments but um.. ur tips on me not bein slang well dats just my style sry i dojnt think id change dat,is just me u noe?

I'm back on this old account and it's great!!!!!! :)

omGG....dat was so great well done Mwazii XOxox Stephy :)

I really enjoy the way you write. Gracious, splendous.
~Hina