awww that poem is so deep i luv it... u r an incredible writer... never give that up cuz u have an amazing gift. much luv, Mandie

i love your poems 5/5

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this was...beyond words...incredible. I loved it. lOVED IT.

I love the bitter betrayl and stupidity you displayed in the people's knowledge of their non-existing savior given to them by simple questions which had always been left unanswered.
i also loved the incredible disappointment you portrayed when the god they had thought to save them ended dead, and their hero was nothing but the devil sent to satisfy his dark intentions of bringing pain and disorder.

I loved these lines,
""Your Creator is the conspirator and he's left you here to die
It is my feeling that he is not real, and he's left his people alone
Though he claims to revive us all and lead us to the promise land of hope
I regret to inform you that his sacrifices were made in vein"

You displayed the conquest and mission so well mixed with this horrible reality and bitter truth.

I also loved your text, your vocabulary was powerful and created an impact to the reader of the dispension of hope and hero.

EXCELLENT

I loved this.