ure too hard on yourself..the poem was very well written n conveys emotion..good job and keep it up! 5/5 for u : )

Really good poem I love it and I can def. Relate. If you get a min check out my new poem called Nobody Notices. Ill ttul
Alyssa

Really good poem I love it and I can def. Relate. If you get a min check out my new poem called Nobody Notices. Ill ttul
Alyssa

great poem! i love it! this is really sad and i hope you know that i would notice and i would be so sad! keep it up though!

Love, Taylor

wow I lvoe this poem. It's kinda ironic cause my name is alyssa too and I am also 14..lol. And I am also a cutter, and no one nitices. I guess I don't want them to though. I do them in places no one would ever see. I am curretly in a PHP program (partial hopital program) aka mental hospital, and i havnen't been in school for 3 weeks so far. my life s u cks so if you ever wanna talk my AIM sn in omglyssison. hope to hear from u soon

lyss

Neva giv up,I kno I nearly did,I regretted it,I lived for other people,not myself,Hold on dude,coz it'll b all sweet wen ur da 1 earning $$$ 4 such a gr8 poem.:)Respect.

Some one will always notice, you have a great writing style, and i love the passion in all of your poems.
L x