you write well, however, too many sad poems will bore a reader. Lighten up and show the world your smile through your precious words!
~Hina

Yeh hun i'll read some more when i get a spare moment but i like your poem! Full of your thoughts and feelings. :)

love it!!! very well written. keep up the great work!
-xXx-

your poem was really sad..the words were really meaningful and itwas really a beautiful poem..good job

Wow great poem.. 5/5! please check out my new poem "Sorry I kissed your sister" it would mean a lot if you commented and voted on it.. thanks a lot.. hugs