In the 3rd line to the bottom, it's spelled spIders, but other than that, nice piece...really unique stuff 5/5

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The Heart That Touches Yours,
Heather Michelle Craig
<333 Shauns Forever <333

thank you for the comment, Heather. it means a lot. but, just to let you know, in all of my poems that i mention spiders, i spell it with a Y. i guess i do this to add my own little spin and personal touch to my work. i'm glad you caught it tho! hope you keep reading! Tom

well dun hun all ur poems are really gud! xxx

Godd, but confusing, I didn't quite understand it................

Slightly confusing, but I like that about it for some reason. I guess this is a personal poem, to which only you can know the true meaning [Unless you tell someone, in which case I shall hush my mouth.] Very unique though, very mysterious. You're a very creative writer, I'm adding you to my favourites :)

Take good care of yourself.
All my love,
Laura.

It definitely has your personal touch...very unique...and interesting....the fourth stanza is inspirational but the rest is sort of disheartening...I think I can really relate to this one...I tell friends and other people to stay strong and to do all these things...when the truth is I haven't managed to do them myself...but somehow it's different... yeah, anyways, spectacular work.

xxx