What Mirrors Whisper

by Kevin   Apr 6, 2005


I just don't have distance
though similar hair i see
to fathom from pictures
or memory laden stories clear
the why of who
and what you are
were
and in my thoughts
might well be

I breathe because
you did before me and poured
all of your everything into
a screwless flat packed something something
a build it yourself anything all
a child and man instructionless and
thinking you could have saved this fall

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  • 19 years ago

    by Brandy Sansotta

    Your work is amazing. Every time I read a poem you write, I find myself being pulled in and I can picture them being written and I can actually get pictures in my mind of what you are talking about. 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Kevin

    I'm not sure whether this is about how i feel about God, or how i feel about my Mother....some might say they are one and the same...but well.

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    very deep

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Excellent write, Kevin, very well written.
    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Kevin,
    in line 13, is it suppossed to be "a build it yourself, anything AT all ?" but other than that, a timeless piece, in depth, still pondering whether I understand it or I'm unsure? but nice work, much unlike any other friendship poem on here 5/5...

    ~¤´¨)
    ¸.·´ ¸.·´¨)
    (¸.·´ (¸.·´`·-----~> God Bless
    The Heart That Touches Yours,
    Heather Michelle Craig
    <333 Shauns Forever <333

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