This poem is dedicated to a very special friend!! As you all know I find writing from the heart very difficult, hence why its taken me so long.

Hope you all enjoy it!!!

Lots of kisses to you all
Hayley xx

Excellent write Hayley. very well expressed! great poem.
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

Hi Haley, what a great write, so erotic yet so pure in thought, who ever that special friend is he is a very lucky man, you captured my imagination completely, and understanding the way that you write, i find it to be a treassure chest full of promises. keep up the good works. as ever your friend Harry

I LOVED IT

Hayley, Absolutely Beautiful, so romantic and I truly loved it. Great job, hugs, lots of love, *Ann*

Hayley...if i mean anything to you, lead me to this woman you write about!
I don't know anything about poetry form, shape, rhyme...but i know if i cant stop reading it, and then read it again...then i believe it to be an excellent poem.

encore!

this poem has mystery, eroticism [ my heart raced in the tenth and eleventh stanza] fantasy dreams with the hope of reality. i enjoyed it very much

Katerina, having heard alot about you, its not surprising "you don't get"...I guess its a little bit over your head.

Nevermind keep the good work.

ANSWER TO A SECRET LOVE

many miles between us, no ocean too wide,
I must get to you, on the other side,
I was drawn to her, from the day that we met,
her sexy body, I will never forget,
we starting in sharing, our each and every thought,
it grew into something that won't be for naught,
we told each other our secrets and our fears,
shared all our smiles, and dried up our tears,
we sit and watch the crashing sea,
her beautiful green eyes are looking at me,
her long blonde hair is smooth as silk,
her dazzling smile is white as milk,
I know the signs when her body moves,
hungry for passion, she sends out the clues,
passion and mystery is what I want her to be,
dancing for me only, so wild, sexy and free,
she is forbidden fruit, not giving in with no fight,
but in my mind she will come to me, later tonight,
dressed only in black silk stockings, she looks so devine,
my eyes explore the body, I want to make mine,
lust runs through me as she parts her legs,
she wants me to kiss her there, she silently begs,
slowly I nibble on her nether lips,
she archs her back, then lifts up her hips,
now that I've started I don't want it to stop,
until she climaxs and I lick every drop,
the thrills running through us, is a fiery storm,
the best feeling I've had, since the day I was born,
now this girl of my dream, is my very last hope,
I'll take her from here, and we will elope,
now wanting her will be a thing of the past,
we will make memories, forever to last.

Amazing poem very well written it was beautiful! I always enjoy your poems! I have a new one it's called "Walk on the beach" if u get a chance check it out! Thanx for all ur nice comments they are very much appreciated! Take Care! Brooke

Hayley this is something else. In all seriousness, it's the kind of poem that could make a mans mind wander...to places it really shouldn't!

Without wax,

Jay.

Excellent. I found it to be imaginative and erotic. Its funny, normally I don't get around to reading a lot of poetry, I just tend to write it, but I like reading your works. Though I'm not a huge fan of love poems, this one is an exception. I enjoyed it quite a bit.

I like your style. Although I usually write about distant or lost love, I really enjoy reading about love experiences. Keep up the great work! I too write mostly about a friend, they are a very great source of material.

Brad

What a poem!It was like a reality life just infront of me.I loved this writting and respected the entire art.Gave you 5.Jeff