Hey, really good poem, definte 5! thanks for you're comment :-) Keep up the good work XxX

Nice write, Ashley. good use of rhyme, with very good flow indeed.
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

Hey ya know the thing about ya...er w/e....Change it cuz he's not ur best friend or ur bf anymore. Just though I wud remind ya! Bye.