The graveyard

by mary   Apr 6, 2005


Walking trough the graveyard at night
with every glance A frighting sight
wolves howling at the moon
you try to sing a silly toon
thinking about horror shows
as the wind starts to blow
rain starts poring down
lighting moving all around

walking along the path
all she wants is just a bath
along the way she sees a light
hoping with all her might
yes! she sees a way out
with joy she begins to shout
wait someone is near

he is saying i can help
you just can not yelp
starting to walk
he begins to talk
who are you?
someone jumps out and says BoO
i jump and realize, its my brother
wait who is the other?

~This is my first poem and i would appreciate it if you would rate it and comment it!~

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  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Hey! For your first poem its great! I really enjoyed readin it! It flowed well and their was a consistancy, wonderful job! Thank you for commenting on my poem it meant alot to me.

    Anyways my fav part about the poem was the ending, it was random and well done. Keep up the awesome work! 5/5
    ~Luvz~
    ~Angie~
    xoxo