all i can say is awesome awesome awesome. This brought me to tears, big improvement todd

wow, that was awesome, I really respect you're writing, its truly amazing. If this is about a true happening, I'm very sorry, and you have my greatest sympathy. People get their lives turned upsidedown everyday because they, or people they know self destruct, and it will hurt everyone with whom they have a relationship, including themselves and their loved ones. Anyway, this is a truly amazing poem, keep it up!

That was great! 5/5