that was deep....and very brilliant, you have so much freakin' talent!! i feel lucky that you actually read my "poems", if you could call them that lol....well keep em' coming, and keep your head up =) ~much love~

-brittnay- (( i doubt i need to tell you i rated this poem a 5.....you probably know that by now))

I loved this poem...it is sad. Maybe when you have the time you could stop by and check out some of my stuff? Great job, 5 for you, again:)

Beautiful as always! I have always enjoyed your work. Your poems will always be noticed by me!

Heather, So meaningful and touches me deeply. Truly sad how parents don't or won't take out a little of their time for their kids. Well written, hugs, lots of love **Ann**

Impressive write, very well done heather.
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

Jeez Heather!!!! That was sad! Nice write though!!....

Nice writer Heather...:)~ 5/5

Oh damn wrong poem!!!!!!!!!!!!

nice poem i likes it i give you a 5 keep it coming.

Wow this was amazing! 5/5 Keep writing!