by «-Pale-Petals-» Apr 7, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Feeling the sand against my feet, |
by Mj
'mazing poem :) very visual piece. |
by Unloved ♥
beautiful job darling I'd love some comments please, and I will check out more of ur stuff!! |
by EpithetPoet
Your talent grows everyday :) hope to see you again soon! |
Wonderful imagery in this. I liked each line on it's seperate merits - Because each line held such meaning. |
You could probably brighten up your rhyme scheme a bit if you stayed constant, but heh, I defently love the beautiful imagery you created!~Nice work...5/5 |