You could probably brighten up your rhyme scheme a bit if you stayed constant, but heh, I defently love the beautiful imagery you created!~Nice work...5/5

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Heather

Wonderful imagery in this. I liked each line on it's seperate merits - Because each line held such meaning.
Just the thought of someone else escaping pain sort can make you happy.

Well written girl.
Luffuuullss Yew <3
;;Kalah.

Your talent grows everyday :) hope to see you again soon!
-A

beautiful job darling I'd love some comments please, and I will check out more of ur stuff!!

Unloved ♥

'mazing poem :) very visual piece.