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by Aubrey Apr 7, 2005 category : Love, romance / lost love
There are cold crimson cries Hidden under this morbid face There are unforgettable images I just can't erase The suns beating down Blinding my shallow eyes As tears roll down my cheek From our bittersweet goodbyes Remembering our times That we use to share here I'll never let you go You whispered softly in my ear Standing in the rain As we use to do Kissing as the rain hits our face Saying I love you But my whispers are to the wind Since your not there to hear I lay upon the cold concrete Just wishing you were near The sun begins to sleep But the rain continues to fall I'm going to try and move on Once and for all
by dezi
aww so sad. Great work, i enjoyed reading it.
by Amit
Excellent write, Aubrey. Impressive work this one. Really good flow of lines. 5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit