Beautiful... simply beautiful!

really really gud hun loved it keep writin ur excellent! xx

thats really good..keep it up.. take care. :)

so much said in such a fantastic way, really loved it, amazing!
take care always, lu -x-x-x-

Unique and well-written. Keep up the good work!
-Kate

vivid and unique.. perfect ending to such a mysterious, yet captivating poem. i really enjoyed this

good style and flow to the poem.enjoyed reading this one although again. unique but very powerful poem. great job.

Cool. 'Bout the only thing I can say. :)

I dont know its good, but i think its getting a bit to cliched. Rather ur works is well mmm wat shall i say maundanely b'ful if u may.

wow, I really like this poem! It's so....secretive, yet so revealing! Great job!

Wow i'd describe it exactly like No Motiv? described it, so secretive yet so revealing! Loved it, can't say anything else. Keep writing,
Satuxxa

Great poem there's something very captivating about it and it's words, Loved it. 5

A very unique scheme, the flow seems a bit off though....not so much to hinder the reading though. Well done.

I've already commented on this poem, but i'll say it again. It's a very good poem, very secretive yet revealing. Keep writing.
Satuxxa

this is realy good i like this

My honest opinion, I thought this was a good poem, although I think you forced the rhyming too much. Still, it was well written, fluent, and unique. Good job

wow....

holy shit! you are extremely good!! i wish i had ur talent.. i have to write long poems to get what i need to get on paper, to make it a good poem... but you, you can write a short little piece like this and its wonderful!! keep em coming!
amanda

GREAT WORK 5 OF 5 FRM ME

Angel eyes,why do you weep?
-they drove the words in too deep

I absolutely love these two lines, it could be interpreted so many different ways and they say so much, I enjoyed this piece a lot. A very nice read. Glad I found it. Good work.