Short this one I think needs a little more to it but other than that good start! It showed ur feelings once again which is good! Take Care! Brooke

kinda has a sad tuch to it aswell. you've got some nice poems. keep it up
tnx for the comment

something about your poems is very touching to me inside i love all of them

I luv this Poem. Sorry I'm puttin' this in da' wrong section but I love that quote U wrote about love being like weed, great in the begginnin' but messin' U up in da' end. TRUE DAT"!!!
(NE wayz if it ain't UR's I'm sorry) I love UR work!!! Keep it up!!!
Thanx* 4 the comment (I wrote NeveR)
****Peace****
(sorry long)