great poem :-) you are an excellent poet keep it up

Great poem deffinatly 5/5
jen x

Hey AMit, thank you for taking a look at my poems. After reading your poems they made me feel a little up beat if you know what i mean. They are trully a talent and i wish the best of luck to you in life. Samantha

Wow, beautifully written. I feel the love you have for her when I read that. You are a very lucky man to have someone to share yourself with like that (not like you needed me to tell you). Cherish every moment you have with her.

Take Care,

Jesse

That is a very passionate poem. If not empowered by love to have the desire to write that, then I don't know where the inspiration flows. Thanks for voting and commenting on my poem.
Its a 5/5.

Gerard KUrt

This is so excellent. sweet and lovely sentiments, i really loved reading this. 5/5