by No Motiv?
I don't really like this poem because I'm not a fan of poems about cutting, ALTHOUGH it is very well expressed. The elements for writing were almost all met, except for a few parts (sentence fluency)....4/5. Job well done. |
by Amanda
OMG! Good poem but u honestly wasn't gonna leave me now were you? I'm online now. Hope u feel better now :) |
by Amit
Thats awesome, touching and very well expressed. very well written and organized write too. |
by katie!
Wow that was o amazing, I love your work so much, keep writing these fantastic poems they really keep me going, Im always here if you ever need me |
by Amanda
I'm back on this old account and it's great!!!!!! :) |
by Samantha
Personally, I find it lacking...It's a cliched subject, and a poem full of cliches. It's not a bad poem, but not an exceptional one, either. |
I think this is a very interesting poem, very unique. I suppose I have no choice but to give it a.... |
by Dorotea©
Very expressful, but I just think there are way too many cutting poems nowadays. I'm actually getting tired of reading them. One thing I really like though is the unique title, and also the poem wasn't just like any cutting poem. It had some originality in it, though I still don't like this kind of poem. Keep writing, and try something else, not cutting. But I did like the poem. |
by Brookeღ
Another amazing poem! I don't cut though you expressed it well! Keep up the good work! I enjoy reading them! Take Care~! Brooke |
by VampyraKiâ€
Nice poem i know the feeling of it and it is very well done |
by NoPatience
wow this poem is so sad. but i love your work keep it up 5/5 |
This is one of your best. I really really like this one. Awesome job!! |
Again excellent job. I feel the pain in this. |
by Marjan
wow, I really enjoyed reading this one. |