Paralyzing Sculpture;

by ElegantlyWasted   Apr 7, 2005


Another paralyzing sculpture,
That stings down her thigh.
*Look at the bruises abuser,
Can you see my blackened eye?*

She creates phony impressions,
To forget his haunting face.
*Why did you come back here,
I thought you'd left this place?*

Now more "hate" incisions,
Are scribbled across her skin
*You left me to suffocate,
And suffer for your filthy sins*

Her attractive '5-Star' face,
Wears a sick-plastered frown.
*What more do i have to say,
To stop you knocking me down?*

He looks around in disgrace,
At this angel dressed in red,
*You words are bleeding me dry,
Please, just get out of my head!*

Smile like before, guilty father,
You have won - she's giving in.
*I don't care if you want to fight,
Do what you like, you win!*

Another paralyzing sculpture,
That burns down her flesh
*This one's for you innocent abuser,
You can't plague me in death!*

+This is so stupid .. But God, I hate him, i bl00dy hate him.+

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    your wrong this isn't a stupid poem, and i don't like your dad either hurting you like this is so wrong you deserve so much better! keep your chin up:)

    ~PLP~ Lil Slam~ lots of hugs and love~

  • 19 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    No poem you do is ever stupid. Every poem you do is brilliant because you put feeling into everything you write. Whether its a happy day you've had and wanted to share, or the hatred of your father. It's simply his loss, you need to remember that. I'm always here for you girl...
    Much love,
    -A

  • 19 years ago

    by «-Pale-Petals-»

    This was so greatly written, you have such talent...You don't deserve what you're going through. 5/5 for sure.

    Take care.
    Luvz [[samz]]xoox

  • 19 years ago

    by ~VaMpIrE KiSsEs~

    Hey Gurl!
    Another great poem! I love all of your poems so much. You should get out of ur house.. I mean you don't deserve that kind of abuse...But anyways, back to poems... Wonderfully written.. like always.. and by the way.. is that a pic of u in ur profile?

    Love ya bunchez!
    Mya

  • 19 years ago

    by Kristen

    That was so sad....

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