by **Just Her** Apr 7, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I turn the radio on |
by ~*Ley*~
That was a really nice read. The ending could use some work, to bring it together more, either it needs more or it needs to be cut off sooner, or I'm not sure, you're the talented one. Great work. Keep it up. |
by Samantha
The end makes it seem like there should be more...But otherwise, you stuck to your rhyme scheme and the meter was met..lol... |
by Brookeღ
Amy, such a sad poem! I wish u all the happiness! Ur poems are all so good but so sad! U have talent another 5/5! |
by katie!
This is really good, well done, really touching... if you have the chance tale a look at mine please |