This is really good, well done, really touching... if you have the chance tale a look at mine please

Amy, such a sad poem! I wish u all the happiness! Ur poems are all so good but so sad! U have talent another 5/5!

The end makes it seem like there should be more...But otherwise, you stuck to your rhyme scheme and the meter was met..lol...

Good.

That was a really nice read. The ending could use some work, to bring it together more, either it needs more or it needs to be cut off sooner, or I'm not sure, you're the talented one. Great work. Keep it up.
~Freak~