short but very good well expressed thoughts. i dint think tears it in that way...but yea they do signify alot and different emotions and i like u put it all in a short poem.

take care keep writing.

i really like this one.. the best out of all 5 that i read
i think its that line about the wine. lol i just thought it was a nice touch to it.

I noticed that your poems don't really have to much rhyming in it. Thats an art that not many people know how to do. I'm still working on getting a mind set where I can do that. keep up all your poem writing.

short and strong. Nicely written, and packing a srong message

Good work :) Youre so good at using so little words and still coming out amazing..
xo

loved it xxx

A unique way of showing emotion! Tears came say a lot! 5/5 Brooke

It was well written. I liked it a lot. If you get a chance check out mine.