hmm sad poem indeed i hope things are ok for u now. no1 shud suffer pain and hope there is light at the end of the tunnel for u. take care.

wow that really sad but good nice wordings
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Its a very good poems but it sounds like theres alot more to it than what you put down. Is your life that bad? Try not to be so depressive. Other than that its a good poem. keep up the good work.

you are right, pain itself is temporary, but what's bihind it, lasts far longer than that
nicely written

Another great piece :) 5/5 Keep it up! And stay strong -x-

5/5 but is anythin u rigt not 5/5 xxx

Do you mean causes pain?
Other than that writen well.
Even though I didn't like the conten.
4/5

A sad poem with a true feeling of pain. I could feel the pain as I read it. Short but you did a great job. Take Care! Brooke