Lamia

by DavidBrendan   Apr 8, 2005


Black spills over the dome of the sky,
Revealing the true king of the sky\'s pale glory,
A hand gently caresses the back of her neck,
Her eyes close as she rocks back and forth,
Her mouth agape in expectation,
The otherworldly lover endows her a silver kiss,
Two figures inseparable as the mind yields,
Leaving the black knight\'s poison to be free,
The curves of her body press against him,
His hand holding her fast at the small of her back,
Her head tilts back when he moves from the kiss,
Staring at the blackness she feels his tender kisses down her neck,
While he\'s gently sucking a low moan escapes her lips,
Before she knows it is rolling down her breast,
and no longer is his kiss tender and sweet,
her exsanguination is his life now,
for her is a Lamia, taking life so that he may live,
as her meager remains let loose her now free spirit,
she is given one more of his tender kisses,
then before the black sky falls unveiling crimson dawn,
Lamia dissolves leaving the world with one less loving soul to fill the void,
Lamia has another name you might know him by,
His name is Pride,
His name is Jealousy,
His name is Love,
His name is Vampyre.

I think vamps are awesome and just the entire mythology of them is fascinating to me so I wanted a poem about them. Lamia is vampire is latin, which is the language I take in school. Vampyre also, at least the reason behind the myth, is supposed to be our innate desire. Because they do everything we wished we did, or could do. Not the blood sucking part, but the ability to fly and to live in the night and give in to ourselves. Thats kind of the point behind it.

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  • 17 years ago

    by David

    What a great and again different poem. gee. this is so good. i love it.

    i gave you a 5. just cause of the perfectness in the way it is wrote. so so perfect.

    David

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Wow - That is pretty deep - I dont really know what to say - your poetry is amazing :) Really keep it up - from the heart xD

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Synh

    I was feeling hot just readin this... i kinda wish it had gone on longer lol

  • 19 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    I really liked this one...I didnt want it to end... I dont know how I never read your stuff before you area great writer...Not like the others on this site your work is truely different...I love it
    Xox Sherrie