I think this is such a sad poem but so beautifully written. I am sorry you had to experience such a loss in your life.

Thanks, it was really hard for me to even write about it at the time, the one year anniversary has just recently passed a few days ago, its easier to write about it but im still not over it. its harder than it sounds to get over the one you loved especially if you lost him as a result of his death.
my poetry is the only way i can say how i really feel so its kind of like gettin it all outta my head, even tho i know i wont. i dunno, its hard to explain.

i like this poem... im sorry for your loss..

this si a really great poem. u r talented. i am so sorry for what happened. keep up the writting!

awesome poem ...u should check out the one i just wrote

great poem
it made me cry, well done
I am sorry for you loss

Thanx everyone, it is still really hard to believe he is gone but it has been over a year and i know he's in a better place. this poem was just to try and help me sort out my feelings.