Comments : Under the makeup

  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    this was really well done the isolation was very good. The images you set up really explained everything you didn't have any reason why but it was still a good read. I think you would like hermit. As far as poems go I will keep this up but one for one because I am getting alot of feed back if thats ok. Robert

  • 19 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    WOW! Another great write hun! I feel the same way sometimes..... great job though! I bet a lot of people could relate! ~5/5~
    Love alwayz....
    Haily
    XOXOXOXOXO

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather Clark

    its sad that people feel they cannot be themselves but society is so quick to judge rather than knowing the person they are judging! Another great poem! *Heather

  • 19 years ago

    by cac123

    wow that was beatiful

  • 19 years ago

    by ºCrimsonTearsº

    This is a good poem. I loved the first stanza. Well done!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Maddie

    Very nicely written.. i really like the last stanza (except you've spelt Here wrong) you've described your emotions so well, really pulls the reader in.. great job

  • 19 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    I liked it

  • 19 years ago

    by Rachele

    awww this is a really good poem thanx 4 ur comment on mine and i hope all ur poems r as good as this gr8 work luv rach

  • 19 years ago

    by Gemmie Lou

    im d same babe xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Trisha

    I loved it. I can really relate to it too. Wow- every one of yours that ive read has been great. really, keep it up chica.

  • 19 years ago

    by PoeticMystery

    Im sure you're beautiful inside and out.

  • 19 years ago

    by Elynnka

    I liked it alot. I sometimes feel like that too. Keep up the good work!

    ~**~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

  • 19 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    wow i've felt like this so many times and you totaly captured the emotion in this poem great job

  • 18 years ago

    by eternitySOlong

    You said what I've always wanted but just couldn't. Thank you!

  • 18 years ago

    by Elynnka

    Usually inner beauty is much more important than the other one, the one you can see at first glance. You have lots of talent and that makes u very beautiful... at least that's what I think. I mean, look, take me as an example, I don't know how you look and stuff, but I really admire you and no matter how you look'n stuff I'll stil admire you cause of your talent.
    Keep up the writing and have faith in yourself! *hugs*

    ~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~