by Robert
this was really well done the isolation was very good. The images you set up really explained everything you didn't have any reason why but it was still a good read. I think you would like hermit. As far as poems go I will keep this up but one for one because I am getting alot of feed back if thats ok. Robert |
WOW! Another great write hun! I feel the same way sometimes..... great job though! I bet a lot of people could relate! ~5/5~ |
its sad that people feel they cannot be themselves but society is so quick to judge rather than knowing the person they are judging! Another great poem! *Heather |
by cac123
wow that was beatiful |
This is a good poem. I loved the first stanza. Well done!! |
by Maddie
Very nicely written.. i really like the last stanza (except you've spelt Here wrong) you've described your emotions so well, really pulls the reader in.. great job |
by Lecrissa
I liked it |
by Rachele
awww this is a really good poem thanx 4 ur comment on mine and i hope all ur poems r as good as this gr8 work luv rach |
by Gemmie Lou
im d same babe xxx |
by Trisha
I loved it. I can really relate to it too. Wow- every one of yours that ive read has been great. really, keep it up chica. |
Im sure you're beautiful inside and out. |
by Elynnka
I liked it alot. I sometimes feel like that too. Keep up the good work! |
wow i've felt like this so many times and you totaly captured the emotion in this poem great job |
You said what I've always wanted but just couldn't. Thank you! |
by Elynnka
Usually inner beauty is much more important than the other one, the one you can see at first glance. You have lots of talent and that makes u very beautiful... at least that's what I think. I mean, look, take me as an example, I don't know how you look and stuff, but I really admire you and no matter how you look'n stuff I'll stil admire you cause of your talent. |