Found

by The Invisible Boy   Apr 8, 2005


The bell rings for lunch
Suddenly my heart begins to pound
I struggle through the crowds
Quickly looking around

As I walk past the queues
My heart begins to pound
I walk out into the fresh air
I walk out to the playground

I stand and talk with my friends
As I look around
Eating my lunch
Then my heart begins to pound

It's the girl I love
I gaze across the playground
It's the moment I was looking for
Now it has been found

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  • 19 years ago

    by The Invisible Boy

    Thanks Lisa, and yeah, that is what I wanted to do, with the repatition, to show that it is getting faster and faster (my pulse/hearbeat) so thanks for noticing it and commenting.

  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    edit-sure

  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    its a good poem and it flowed well one thing is that your heart pounded alot...the repetition(sp?) made syre that the reader knew exactly how you felt...well done.

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