Over and over again...

by amanda   Apr 8, 2005


Since the first time you said Hello.
We were meant to be friends forever.
But nothing is forever.
But I wish forever would last forever.
But everyone moves on..
So she did.
Moved on without saying goodbye.
She once said we will always be best friends..
But what she said was a lie.
The lie went straight through my soul through my heart over and over again, until i couldn't feel the pain anymore..
but i wish she would change her mind and become my best friend again, which she once was.
But nothing is forever.
I feel so empty inside without her in my life..
No one to talk to.
No one to tell my thoughts to.
I just feel so alone..

^^^^^^^ sorry its not a good poem but please comment it would mean alot to me.. but this is how i feel..

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  • 19 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    No hun its a good poem - its got a unique style and I personally enjoyed reading it very much. There is some fine tuning needed on your grammar and capitalisation but the poem in itself is a really brilliant piece of writing
    Keep it up :o)

  • 19 years ago

    by amanda

    yeah thanks... i wish this wouldnt have happened...

  • 19 years ago

    by girlii797

    i liked it. I have experienced this once before with one of my friends. Don't worry someone new will come along and make up for the pain you feel (even though that isn't comforting now).

  • 19 years ago

    by Rocky

    well done like it 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by HottChic

    Great poem. I hope that you get a new best friend soon.