by amanda Apr 8, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
Since the first time you said Hello. |
by Eibutsina
No hun its a good poem - its got a unique style and I personally enjoyed reading it very much. There is some fine tuning needed on your grammar and capitalisation but the poem in itself is a really brilliant piece of writing |
by amanda
yeah thanks... i wish this wouldnt have happened... |
by girlii797
i liked it. I have experienced this once before with one of my friends. Don't worry someone new will come along and make up for the pain you feel (even though that isn't comforting now). |
by Rocky
well done like it 5/5 |
by HottChic
Great poem. I hope that you get a new best friend soon. |