AWWWWWW, i really liked the poem and all the meanings and stuff it was very well written, great job!! keep it up * jealous* T_T
~Take Care~

-Kit

THis was soooo awesome! I read it out loud... the rhyme is totally cool. It was very sheek and unique! It's an awesome poem... great job!
Car

Very unique style I liked that! It had great meaning! An amazing poem! Could u check out my newest one "Walk on the beach" would really appreciate it! Thanx and Take Care! Brooke

this was a magnificent poem, so different and imagenitive
5/5

wow very different but i like it! the way you used the words really gave across a certain sort of feeling and made its impact more strong wonderful! >>5/5<<
bec

great poem! i love it! a lot of meaning and it all flowed well! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

loved it!
amazing!

Nice poem. i really like the part about the sun being a fool's deceit after the rain. That line is awesome! Thanks for commenting on my poem, i really appreciate it. Keep writing!
always,
brittany
P.S. Superman is my best friends and my favorite superhero. hehe.

You said you wanted an honest critique...Well, here goes....

Great poem. :)

I personally think that all the compliments you've gotten aren't just people saying "good job, keep it up", it's people being truthful.

very good poem...the rhyming takes away from some of the poem, maybe you should revise it? 4/5.

Powerful poem, I liked the way you wrote it! There are so truly beautiful lines in it, I can't pick out one because I liked loads of them! Anywayz really loved it, keep it up xxx

very good! 5/5! keep it up.. please check out my poems! hugs

Great poem yeah bit confusing at first but then you get the rhythm and its alot easier good job

WOW your really good i wish my poems could for once turn out like that! It was amazing truly, great work!
**~Kaori~**

Well i thought this poem was excellent, you have such a unique way of writing where you leave some things for the readers to imagine and allow room for personal thoughts and experiences... I liked the style of this poem and once again the flow. DEFIANTLY a 5* AND a spot on my faves!

FREE FLOWING THOUGTS IN ORDER GRET POEM 5

Simply and truly exquisite, and that's the truth.

omg that was great. u are an amazing writer. i have seen your comments on others, and they are very...smart lol...i wud love it if u wud read mine. nowhere near as good as yours tho. i loved the poem. amazing, truely.

wow, this really caught my eye! i absolutely loved the lines about devil's horns on an angel and that hate is the love that angel's don't send! very creative! keep it up!

i guess i read it 5 or 6 times before i found a good pace to read it but when you find that it really flows. great job and keep up the great work.