I dont like this, not the poem there is not a peice of your work i dont love its just the content..i dont like you hurting yourself like that and getting hurt as you do. I care too much about you bud for you to think that ppl would be better off with you gone. Sometimes looking at all the ppl around us we can feel like it wouldnt matter and to some ppl it wouldnt but to others ...it would destroy them if you left, we all need us some Andrea around here!, so please hang in there and know that i care about you and there are others just like me who feel that your a very beautiful, talented, girl that should stay. I just wish i could help your home life.
i love you and hope your going to be ok
Take care,
-Allen
(miss you pussycat, -teddy)

I'm so sorry you feel this way, you write so well and have so much talent, stick around for a sad arse like me to have some release in reading your poems... if you ever want to talk.....

Try and vent with poems, it had your emotion in it and thats all that matters, I really do hope things get better, stay as strong as possible my dear, keep it up xxx

I really love how you wrote this poem but i don't like what you wrote at the end. i have felt so much anger that i've sliced myself and it sucks cause it makes you feel so different but just keep lookin up and try to avoid self mutalation

o sweety how come you dont talk to me anymore? i try to help you, give u a reason to live..... god if i ever lost you i dk wtf id do....... you are one of my bestest friends! great write but i hate to see u so sad.....i wub u!
jescelle

extremely powerful. i think you did a great job writing this poem. i hope that you are aite though. you gotta stay strong aite. plz dont cut. your better then that. stay strong. Much Luv

Nick

Andrea,

Stay strong sweetheart, we all love you here hun, if you need me, call on me! I LOVE YOU BUNCHES GIRL =)

Love Always,
Heather

I always wonder that question too. What will i do? What can i do to make myself happy? I still havent found it, but i have found friends who make my lif beautiful. Some are even from this site. I still get immensely depressed very easy, but now i know that i can at least talk to someone about it. It helps. I'm always here for you girl :)
much love,
-A

I loved it!! Have you put any poems in any competitions yet? I loved this one too so so so much...please please send it in...
Keep the Faith
Peace Out

Good poem...stay strong Andrea, good things do come to good people like yourself.

I don't think this poem is crappy at all. I think poems are for transfering feelings from the inside out onto paper and this did its job well :) Besides, the structure is unique I think its well written.... I do hope everything is going well for you tho, look after yourself okay??? Take care :)

^ Like everyone else said.. THIS IS NOT CRAPPY AT ALL! It's very good and emotional! I hope you're okay though! Remember, you can always e-mail me if you need someone to talk to! Take care, hun! <3

I love it... It has alot of deep emotion... Keep your head up (always) take care xx:

*> : PainOfOne

it was ok andrea. I just feel that you were writing out all your anger and frustation that perhaps you wanted to just say to someone else? I think your a wonderful poet.

If you wish to talk you can always trust me, i am the friend that never betrays, be assured of that.

Aim: Dark C Savior
Msn: Lacrossefanforlife@hotmail.com
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Best of luck to you andrea, i hope whatever it is you shake it off soon.

Signed,
Dark Savior

keep yur chin up, sorry i havn't been on lately i am gonna catch up on reading your poems when i get more time! remember keep your chin up stay strong!

~PLP~ Lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

aw, i loved this poem i wish i could write as good as you can... this was a great read, and i hope you find ur way soon.
5/5
Take Care
-Kit

Hey there, thank you for all of the comments, they really mean a lot to me. i have made my oath. its called "On My Honor". i am pledging myself to you, i will not cut. Much Love Always aite. hope your doing good?

Nick

p.s be strong, i have faith in you

thats really not crappy i know crappy you want crappy cheak some of my stuff out..ill just say your a better writer then ill ever be ;)

~rene~

w/e! this is not crappy! all your poems are great! and i love all of them and this one! just remember if you need me you can talk to me or stroke your big hairy monkey nuts! hehe well keep it up!

Love, Taylor

true emotion don't lose hope well written dark poem