With a prayer on my lips,
a kiss goodbye.
Turning away,
so she won't see me cry.

I tried to be strong
it was her request.
No sorrow or tears
it's all for the best.

Love those stanzas, very nice job Holly...sorry for the loss, Stay strong, and of course, you shall be in my prayers! 5

Love Always
Heather

hi Holly, wow you really made a hit with this poem, and you said you had writers block, shucks woman, this is as good as it gets, I am sorry you lost your friend, I know it is hard to imagine life without them, but we carry on and cherish the fond memories, I am glad too see you writing again, keep it up. as always your friend Harry

My prayers are definitely with you and Angie`s family Holly..what a great follow up to " My Awaiting Angel"...beautifully written..I especially love the quick pace phrases...Love, Tim

i liked this poem... very well writen... sorry about ur loss... but theres always a reason why... and we know that she's resting in heaven with god and angels around her... smile...

much love
+++letishia+++

This poem is very well written, i know how hard it is to write about people who have passed.. write to me some time x_ima_fake_x@hotmail.com

Sorry to hear that that happened... I currently have a step grandfather that is fighting some sort of cancer, It sucks a lot...

Sorry to hear that that happened... I currently have a step grandfather that is fighting some sort of cancer, It sucks a lot...

im so sorry about your mums friend both mu uncle and my nest friends little sis died of it. a beautifully written poem, keep up the outstanding work love hannah xxx