Thank you (laura)

by lifes big mistake   Apr 8, 2005


Thanks you for being there,
when Ive been down,
i don't know you by face
but you always stop my frown

on many days you ask
so how are things with you?'
usually answer not to bad
you'd always answer the same to

but i knew that you needed me
needed caring ears
but you kept so strong
and listens to my tears

so tonight i want to thank you
for always being there
for always listen to me go on
and really trying to care

your not like others
i really feel that you try
to listen and console my problems
when all i want to do is cry

please no i owe you
and i want to pay you back
for helping me smile on bad days
for keeping me on track!

***laura this is for you i know that we have never meet but i wanted to say thanks for helping me out your poems and your words always seem to help me!! I'm always here for you
thank you xxx***

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  • 18 years ago

    by Leah20

    Nice job. This is a good start. Keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    Hmm, you asked me to comment on this poem, but as you see I've already done that. Keep writing,
    Satuxxa

  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    This poem dedication was beautiful, I truly enjoyed it. I don't have any suggestions of improvement, just keep writing poems, you are talented!
    Satuxxa

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    I'm back on this old account and it's great!!!!!! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by No Motiv?

    nice poem, very expressive and clear that you appreciate your friend! job well done, 4/5.