by Gemmie Lou Apr 8, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I can see the pain living in your eyes |
This is a really great poem. I love the wording and repitition. I also love how it seems to jump around just a little with rhythm. Awesome work! |
I liked this poem because it showed a lot of feeling and at the time told a story. Its really good..keep writing! ;-) |