by ..::Angel of your darkness::.. Apr 8, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Ashley was beautiful but very thin |
by gumshuda
This is such a sad poem which shows the happening of every hour. |
This is really good in August the 19th of this year ;one of my friends killed him self than the monday wednesday and thursday and friday of that week I had four other friends kill themselves and scene school started one of my other friends died in operation and one hung himself and my cousin killed himself cuz his girlfriend for two years left him and my best friend who was always there for me told me he would never do anything like that cuz he saw how much it hurt me and three weeks after he told me that his little brother found him in his room with a gun in his hand and blood on the floor he killed himself he left me a letter and said he was sorry he had to take the cowards way out he said he would always be with me. it hurts to have almost all your friends kill themselves with in five months. it is the worst thing to have to deal with exspecially when it is your best friend. but all of your poems are really great. |
Wow, this one really touched me hun, I have some young sibblings and I babysit for a lot of little kids, it is scary to think I could loose one of them . . . you wrote that very well, it made me cry. Great job hun. |
by Lecrissa
on the mark verse, is it those he loved most? Or those who loved him most? |
by Lecrissa
I loved this. Its very sad and full of meaning. 5/5 |